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How can a line of poetry with no verb still be a line of poetry? ("Withered vines, old tree, crows at dusk")
Three things sit side by side with no verb. The reader assembles them into a picture of a darkening evening, and the feeling is already in it. Poetry 1.
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The first line of Ma Zhiyuan's "Autumn Thoughts" (天净沙·秋思) is 枯藤老树昏鸦: "Withered vines, old tree, crows at dusk." It's three things and not a single verb. This is a chain in the question map for middle school Chinese: Why, Then, What if. Three questions in all.
How can a line of poetry with no verb still be a line of poetry?
The line just sets three things next to one another: withered vines, an old tree, and crows in the evening. There's no verb and no one is said to be looking. But the reader puts them together into a picture, and it's a dim one, with night about to fall. The poem leaves the assembling to you, and by the time you've done it, the feeling is already in the picture. This technique is called juxtaposing images, and it can make a reader feel lonelier than a line like "I feel so alone" ever could.
What if…?
The next line is 小桥流水人家, "A small bridge, flowing water, a family's home," and it sounds warm. So why does the poet put it in the middle of the poem?
Next: open the next question, "Why does the bridge line sit in the middle?", or type your own.